OK

Vi kan ta bort den här raden bara: "Only one example, well known to most,: the military-industrial complex in USA. "

De vi skickar till är människor som redan är politiskt engagerade, de kan komma på många exempel själva

Nej, jag håller med dig, föreslå gärna en bättre formulering alternativt en kompletterande (utan USA-koppling) som motvikt..

Vi behöver inte explikt dissa usa. Vi kan låta det vara underförstått

Sitter här o filar på engelska:

Invitation to the most important OS-project ever;

You have received this mail due to the fact that You currently are workning with software development in the area of democracy and politics.

Unless You wasn't aware of it, You are part of the most important movement since the creation of internet or even democracy itself.
The movement that finally can give an end to the most severe drawbacks of this modern society, called mankind.
Problems like wars, famin, criminal and environmental destruction, are all partly or mainly a consequence of the improductive and sometimes corrupt system called representative democracy.
Only one example, well known to most,: the military-industrial complex in USA.

Enough about the current systems' shortcomings!
By this mail we would like to invite You and Your colleagues to a larger common development project;
Instead of us all working indepenently in the small scale, shouldn't we benefit of cooperation in the big scale?

The best parallell ever would of course be the development of Linux.
Programmers all overt the world contributed around the clock (and still are) to create a truly open and versatile operating system for computers.

osv osv.... Bidra gärna med fortsättnigen!